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      <description>&lt;p&gt;A &lt;a href="http://www.trabian.com/articles/2006/03/21/say-it-in-29-words-not-116"&gt;recent post&lt;/a&gt;  shared five tips on how to write better web content.  The first: learn to edit.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;It&amp;#8217;s so tough because school assignments programmed me to ramble.  I wrote a ton of papers, and most turned out mediocre due to a minimum length requirement of ten pages (12 pt. Times New Roman, double-spaced, of course).&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;First drafts would always land a few pages short. I&amp;#8217;d squeeze the margins in by a quarter inch, increase the line spacing to 2.25, bump the font size up to 12.25, and cover every paragraph with adjectives.  If that didn&amp;#8217;t stretch it to having just a line on that tenth page, I&amp;#8217;d pad it with more adjectives and take a tenth of an inch where I could.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Years of minimum page requirements taught me to deploy the adjectives at the front-end of the process.  Eventually I got so comfortable with verbosity that I still struggle with the habit.  Here&amp;#8217;s what I do to combat drivel:&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;ul&gt;
	&lt;li&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Use a staging area.&lt;/strong&gt;  On posts like this, I start in the scratch pad on my Google Desktop sidebar before moving to a better staging area.  When I put together content for a traditional site, I use a wiki for taking inventory, editing and collaborating.  When I need collaboration on something short, &lt;a href="http://www.writeboard.com"&gt;Writeboards&lt;/a&gt; also work nicely.  (When &lt;a href="http://www.writely.com"&gt;Writely&lt;/a&gt; allows new registrations again, I&amp;#8217;ll add that to my options.)&lt;/li&gt;
		&lt;li&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Get honest feedback from tough critics.&lt;/strong&gt;  How can I tell if I&amp;#8217;m getting honest feedback?  If it stings, it&amp;#8217;s honest.  It helps to work with people who aren&amp;#8217;t afraid to tell you when you&amp;#8217;re off your game. (Thanks, Matt, Brent, and Mark.)&lt;/li&gt;
		&lt;li&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Keep it &lt;del&gt;as short as possible&lt;/del&gt; concise.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
		&lt;li&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Identify your weaknesses.&lt;/strong&gt;  It&amp;#8217;s through the sting of honest feedback mentioned above that I&amp;#8217;ve learned I&amp;#8217;m a passive writer, a comma splicer, and a rambler.  I watch these reappear, then I do my best to fix them. &lt;/li&gt;
		&lt;li&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Bookmark and revisit this Lifehack post on &lt;a href="http://www.lifehack.org/articles/lifehack/fifty-50-tools-which-can-help-you-in-writing.html"&gt;fifty tools for better writing&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/li&gt;
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